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Chapter 3 Sneak Peek

September 6, 2009

Wow, I haven’t posted in a while. 😳

I was stuck on Chapter 2 of my story, so a few weeks ago, so out of boredom, I started working on Chapter 3. I changed the story somewhat- the dragon cave is at the base of a mountain, and Delvyréla is eleven years old.

I will change it a lot before it’s officially released. It will be more relevant to the end of Chapter 2 (which remains unfinished).

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Two hours slowly became three as Delvyréla guided herself and Arryzério throughout the forest. The trees obscured almost all visual cues to the location of Mount Rendyflykon, where a herd of Kazerreshrida dragons had settled in a cave that had been hollowed by harsh winds.

“This is horrendous,” whined Delvyréla miserably as a gust of wind whipped a long, wide wisp of hair in her face. This revealed her elegant, pointed ears.

“I totally agree,” said Arryzério. “However, strong winds mean Mount Rendyflykon is nearby.”

The enormous, rocky, rugged mountain, whose peak was the highest point in Kishrylmia, was infamous for its harsh winds and freezing climate. Even in the warmest summer months, it was capped with freshly fallen snow.

As Delvyréla and Arryzério neared the mountain, it was much more visible. It was not long before the forest had thinned into a nearly lifeless plain at the base of the mountain.

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I had a hard time describing some thiongs, but tell me what you think!

Vékriarralyn jaschryl!

~Zaeriuraschi 11098

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